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for Indago:Reborn

by lojenn

person LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww cute!
harry\'s like a baby...\"I am Harry. I\'m going to have a baby.\"
hehehehehe
I can totally see him saying that!
I kinda wished this chapter would have progressed a little more but I LOVE all the little details you put in
and the info on the indago
what was that light sweat on Sev\'s skin?
anyways,
UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON!! OK?
I dont really think you need a beta; your writing is superb as is!
UPDATE SOON!!
person Vikki
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read Idago and Idago reborn, chap 1 to the latest chap. I enjoy reading it very much. I like the dynamic within the pack :) Your story is so sweet it made me cry. Harry\'s mood is funny and insightful at the same time. Idago is interesting. Is it original? I think Draco/ Snape should exercise his control on Harry more often so that he won\'t get overwhelm when he met another supero. (Actually, I\'m a control freak.) Oh! and I like the werewolves scene and Harry was very in-character. Ah! and I knew it was Snape who caused the miscarriage! *am proud*

Thanks for this wonderful story.
person Elk
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another splendid chapter I\'d say! You did excellent on how the Indago\'s reaction on pregnancy and such, how did you come up with all of this? 10/10 mate, it\'s really good and I look forward to seeing the future chapters. For one thing, Draco does deserve feeling guilty for what he did to Harry previously in the first series of Indago. I hope Harry will be all right during giving birth...til then!

-Elk
person Missi
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet needy Harry! I love this fic, and the other fic, and this chapter, and my dogs. I definately love my dogs. Anyway, this update was amazing and I can\'t wait for the next one-or for the \"fluid test\" with Draco!!
person The doctors In
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the most unique stories I have ever read and well written. You could well come in as my second favorite writers that I have read. Julie with her Elanors Revenge comes in as first, though she could use a good beta. Both of you show simularities in the ability of writing in such a style that one always knows just what is going on and what the character is thinking and feeling. Good luck and I look forward to your updates.
person mira
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They are as snarky as ever. I was afraid you werent going to bring their personalities back, but you did! Wished it was longer because I am a horribly impatient and rabid fan:) Loved it loved it as usual and update soon!
person ChasteBlush
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was brilliant, i really liked the idea of Snape examining Harryu and everything, the liquid stuff and everything was a really good isdea, and the whiole Harry sub thing still makes me tingle, lol! anyway keep up the good work, i could seet this becoming as ogood as the first one, Indagop!!! lol, sorry about the spelling mistakes but if i peress delete then it deletas the entire message and i\'bve already written it out five times by mistake cause i keep forgetting lol.

ChasteBlush formely DracosBitch
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person anavelipad
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay you\'re back, i have always been hoping for new chapter everytime i check the site =D great chapter, not much happening but it\'s okay ^^ pls put up more chapters soon, love you!
person Weathered
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I loved that chapter. It\'s beautiful...and the baby sounds adorable already. (how I came to the conclusion, I don\'t know. That\'s just my logic for you, lol) Please update soon!!
person avihenda
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute chapter. can\'t wait to read more.

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