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As always, you are absolutely amazing! Very, very believable.

I loved the dream sequence from way back when, and I love that the birth mark determines the paternity of the male offspring. Although I guess that won\'t really matter in this case.

Eventually, does Hermione get to experience a little bit of what her life would be like if she chose Marcus? Not sex, necessarily...but something? Of course, I don\'t know what that would do to her relationship with Severus.

I wonder if Marcus will eventually fall in love with her, by the time he proposes to her. Or if he\'ll just fake it really, really well.

I can\'t wait to read your update!

This is good! Poor Severus! He\'s jealous. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Ch 6 - \"She saw his eyes were wet. He had been crying. Severus Snape

i haven\'t read the next chapter yet, but i wanted to say thanks for posting so soon!
cheers.

jebus. really makes you feel a bit frightened of him doesn\'t he? tell you one thing, i wouldn\'t want to be on the recieving end of severus\'s wrath.

awww
poor severus!!!

Well. That was... intense.

Ch 3 - That was a very powerfully written chapter. Nice imagery.

Brilliant - as always! I look forward to your next update!!!

Really enjoying the series of stories you have connected here on this web site. Some authors dumb-down the characters and over-simplify dialogue that doesn\'t keep in touch with the characters per JKR. I like stories like yours that add description, detail, a suspension of disbelief factor and of course rewards of nice juicy lemons when needed! This new character will prove to be very interesting and I will enjoy seeing him yank Severus\' chain - he DID say he would fight for Hermoine if ever challenged right?
Keep on doing what you are doing!