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for #6 ~ A Matter of Matrimony

by Ms_Figg

person beeky63
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! A dark, dangerous man out to get Snape\'s woman. He won\'t take kindly to that.
Toodles.
person Jenn
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is an excellent heavy, very much in the same vein as Severus but not as
good. I do like his interest being piqued by Hermione and her favorite indulgence.
I do wonder how he will die at Snape\'s hands?
person calamitysandra
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds intresting,

Keep going girl

Sandra
person Kat
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like it\'ll be another FABULOUS story! Please, please continue it...I will definately continue reading it.
person Holly
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aha! A new beginning. I like it. (I knew you wouldn\'t be able to keep away from writing for long!)
person Lady Silver Brooch
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great introduction...if you are going to continue...which I hope you will.
person Addict
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ms Figg, you are a master at your art. I\'ve all but stopped reading other writers these days- you give me all I need! And it\'s good to know that you\'re enjoying writing just as much as we\'re enjoying reading. It\'s rare to find an author who can produce as much as you do on a regular basis...at this rate, you ought to be writing whole books.
Macus is a very interesting character, with definite possibilities. I like the vague \'little lost soul\' thing he\'s got going on, and I\'m so ready to read the clash between him and Snape. Something else, though...I\'ve been dying for the staff to find out about Sev and Hermione\'s life together. Not the gory details, but this continued lack of understanding they have is frustrating.
As for your question, is Marcus good for the Marriage story...Ms Figg, you have some of the best writing instincts I\'ve come across, from bringing in new characters (like Eli), new spells and potions (which fit with canon, unlike some we read about here), to basic literary devices like denying us lemons (always leave them wanting more) (then give them more). Trust those insticnts- we\'ll love whatever you come up with!
Thank you so much for writing! You\'re a treat!
person lily
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. I have been reading them off and on all day today. It took about five hours but it was well worth it. Please continue writing, you are awesome. I can not wait to read what you write next.
person lovethelab
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I am starting to write this, I am rolling my eyes because this is the third time in the past hour or so that I have had to tell you how wonderful you are and how much I enjoy reading what you have written. So what ever! I really love your new character. I think he will give Severus a bit of a run for his money. I believe Hermione will be her nice friendly helpful self and never see what hits her until it is too late. I hope she still has her charm bracelet!
person LoveSpell
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are so good that it doesn\'t matter where they go, just as long as they go!

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