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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i like your story and want to see what you will do with it. cant wait for future chapters
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I'm so glad to see a new chapter. :-)
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, bye
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now Harry needs a familiar. it would be a good time to bring Hedwig back, alive and kicking as a phoenix and have Fawkes turn up as well.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I noticed that you posted a new chapter but you didn't go back and fix the mistakes you made in the chapter with Japan. I'm pretty sure my review is still but I just thought I'd repeat what i said, in case.
The suffix, would be -SAN not -SON. And also for Harry because he is in a position of respect (Lord, royalty, chief, etc), he would be -SAMA. I really hope that you will make those changes because the way you have it now is incorrect.
The suffix, would be -SAN not -SON. And also for Harry because he is in a position of respect (Lord, royalty, chief, etc), he would be -SAMA. I really hope that you will make those changes because the way you have it now is incorrect.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually review as I never know what to say. But this story is amazing. So much detail must have taken forever. I really hope you continue it soon.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GODS AND GODDESSES THIS IS ONE EXCELLENT STORY!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!
UPDATE SOON!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!
UPDATE SOON!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so looking forward to your next chapters update!!! Please email me please when ever you get the chance i don't want to miss out on anything!!!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have loved your story - it has so many unique elements. I am really looking forward to read more of it, lots more of it.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. I can't wait to read more. DO watch out for mixing up your facts. It was 20% not 10% to the Goblin managers, and Wormtail was killed off with the 50 DE's who attacked the first time.