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for Return of the King

by wolfwalkerron

person beca
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do sincerely hope, this story will have an update very soon, my dear!
person Savvy0331
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful story!!! I absolutely love it!. I hope you update soon so I can keep on reading. I have a suggestion for the Great Hall. I think there should be 8 tables instead of the old house tables. This would really promote getting along. Well done!!
person lilywood
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! This story is so good! So detailed. You really wrote a lot! Please update soon.
person Echo
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and story. Sad that it\'s the children that are always the victims. Unless it was a mistake, I don\'t believe a british soldier would knowing shoot a child. After all there are rules in civilized conflicts and they\'re not terrorist or evil incarnate like LV & his deatheaters. Publicity would turn their own people as well as the world against them (Not something a politician however idiotic would do ... maybe he was also tampered with ;p ). Please update soon.
person ice owl
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although this is a fun chapter you might want to check the restrictions on posting. I am pretty sure you are not allowed to use real people here in the fiction section.
person Honor
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the chapters so far, and hope we will see an update soon. Maybe we can have another lemon scene *hint. hint*

BTW sometimes you have strange grammatical errors - words spelt correctly that aren\'t quite the right word, for example. Maybe you should look for a Beta / Pre-reader.

Honor
person Yana
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahaha poor Harry
person ice owl
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was cute...sent to Antartica to measure snowflakes!
person Yana
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story
i love it
please will the next chappy be out soon
person lilywood
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited when I saw that you updated! Great chapter! Man, I don\'t like Hermione. She needs to get hers! Update soon!

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