rate_review Reviews

I am glad you put it up here. Are you going to update daily to get it caught up with the other on you other site? I think you should, it would make it much easier when trying to reread your story. Are you going to put up Harry Potter Return of the First Ones here? I love your story and again thank you for putting it up here. please update soon!
~Jennifer

*nods head* Good! I\'m glad to find this! I was more than peeved when Fanfiction.net delated it! Since this fanfic is one of my favorites...

im happy you decided to repost this I was reading it when ff.net deleted it.

i thought from the title that this might bear some resemblane to Tolkein\'s work. i like it a lot, i will be watching for updates. i have only two things to complain about.. and that is simply because i am fickle n.n;

one:
when the book was first written the name of the book, first movie and most importantly the stone was not the sorcerer\'s stone but the philosopher\'s stone.

two:
i assume the term that A\'Ron is using (Mel\'Anin i think) is meant to be that in elvish which means \'my friend\'. am i right? if not, then please ignore this next sentence. This spelling is actually incorrect, the precise spelling being Mellon Nin, mellon meaning friend and nin meaning my or mine.

I hope i have been constructive and fair in my critisizing, i\'m sorry if you have taken offence to this. please update soon.