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by nrvana06

person Herphilia
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, I quite liked what I read so far, but girl you seriously need a beta. Plus putting the thoughts of the characters in brackets looks weird and is a bit difficult to read. You might want to check your grammer over as well, I noticed some mistakes and english isn't even my native language...
person whatever
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh i'm so mad at you for not updating for a really long time but u made it up with with a jealous draco right on and please keep blaise in the picture just not with ginny update soon!
person rox
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!
I love you're story..
wats to know how it continues!!
person blondiexoxo
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i likw it keep writing
person Stacy
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
Keep up the good work.
person Mrs.J.Malfoy
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it started out a little slow but thats cool. i like it.
person rangerbabe
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep the chapters coming!!!
person jess
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good so far, so keep up the good work. Really interested in whats going to happen next !
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update please. so much fun.
person Legomygrego19
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! but I won\'t say hurry with the next chapter, I understand it takes time to make it worth while :)

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