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Thank you so much for continuing your story. I've followed it right fom the start and I must say that I especially like the setting and Lucius . Of course I love Severus so I am extremely excited . Thank you. Love, barb

*CLAPS* Another wonderful chapter!!!! I'm sorry that I am just NOW getting around to it. Damn internet!

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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I'm loving this story, you're doing great! I'm only on chapter four, but I am already laughing my ass off at Lucius.......quality humour! Great stuff, shall read the rest soon as I can!!

What a great story! I really enjoyed reading it so far and I'm looking forward to future updates. Kudos!

This is so wonderfully original. I have really enjoyed reading it. (BTW when they were on the beach, I kept yelling at my poor computer - "Apparate, you idiots!" I suppose fear does stop one from thinking clearly at times.)

I love the textured weave of this fic. Looking forward to the pantheon's upcoming antics.

I am... thoroughly captivated :)

The way you have weaved this story, flitting between third-person narrative for the world around him, and then Lucius' own perspective is just brilliant. I also love the way you've integrated Ancient Mythology, especially Greek. I do hope there is more to come, as I said, I'm completely hooked!

Though... one thing irks me slightly. I'm not sure I trust Aratole and Nick. I just get this distinct vibe that they are going to spread discord amongst Severus and Hermione and Lucius and Dawn - who by the way is a brilliant foil for Lucius.

Please update soon!

Bek

I can't imagine why you don't have more reviews. This is a very well-nuanced story and a captivating read. I am enjoying the characterizatoins you've sketched and the mystery. Good work.

I love the story. However, *Which is my but* It is annoying when you go over to other languages. Could you not put the English version next to the orginal speech? A majority do not read French. I must confess not being to read English well. You see I am Dyslexic, so author's like yourself are to me amazing. But please remember, us readers who are not so amazing...I know you are posting the translations at the end of a chapter. Perhaps you should try it. Go on a language you do not know, and then read the translation.

However, I can confirm New Jersey is a wonderful state. There are some area's that need Goverment aid, but many places I visited were stunning. Best wishes Donavon.

p.s. Only just discovered your story.

What a marvellous surprise to find an update to your story. I hope that you enjoyed your trip to Greece; did you find out there that the Mediterranean is tideless? In chapter 3 the tide would not have rolled in to soak Hermione and Severus ;-)
Looking forward to further chapters!