rate_review Reviews

I was kind of unsure at first...but that was freaking HOTT!

I loved the story!I just wanted it to keep going on forever!If I made a wish like that I think that my friend would get kicked out of the room though!and I would have made him beg for mercy!:)

O dear Gods! More please *holds up Snape bowl* Wonderful Wonderful, didn\'t know it was possible to get turned on and laugh at the same time :K Would be interesting to see where you could take this, or branch off to

Squeeeeee! That was sooo good! *is nearly crying with laughter* That was absolutely a Grade-A Smutfic loaded with laughs. Good Melissa was so funny, nearly everything she said and thought had me giggling like a mad woman. And woah, \"twins\" eh? Can you say children of the corn? Ah I want to see a sequal with the girls trying to track down their babies father to make him pay child support or something(and make him into their enteral sexslave *nodnod*) Ah now I must keep an eye on you and read your other stuff!

I\'m sure you meant this as a parody...and boy, did it fit the bill!!! This story rocks on several levels,.and (shhhh) we won\'t breathe a word to the Las Vegas gaming tourism board thingee.

I always love reading your work.

Totally Hot Story!!!! It\'s true what they say what happens in Vegas Stays in Vegas! MMmmm I wouldn\'t have minded being in one of the girls places for sure. *Grins*