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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rather bleak and angst-ridden. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Overall, well written.
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic beginning! I am so hooked. The chapter is long and it will be well worth any wait if you continue to craft your story like this. Thanks so much for a great read.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story here. It\'s got a lot of potential. Well written, too. I can\'t wait to read more.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An excellent start. I am looking forward to updates.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An intriguing start - I hope there will be more soon.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting & unique story plot!
Nice gritty atmosphere with live wire characterization.
Nice gritty atmosphere with live wire characterization.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful! You have a major story here, dark and scary as it should be. Please update soon. Excellent chapter, brilliant writing.