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Excellent chapters! I love how complicated it has quickly become. Now we know why Severus was stock piling food and blankets and such. Looking forward to more!

*shakes head* man... i swear.. this fic gets better each time i read it.. please continue.. i want to see how this all ends.. and i hope there are more plans and bitchiness abound.. and another thing.. Draco is soooooo submissive.. is that what happens when one of the break?? Inferi i mean.. cause if so.. i swear.. i truly hope Har don\'t break but tone down a little at least *nodding*

Wicked awesome!
I really can\'t wait to
see what happens next!
The suspense is killing me.
I love this new twist, and the
sence of Hogwart\'s distrution was
way to neat. I could just picture the
dark, crumbling, and diserted halls. I
can\'t beliee Hogwart\'s is gone. *Sniffles*
Please update soon oh gracious one!

Mashell

Yeah! I havent\' been on, too busy the last 3 days but I demanded to take a study break (yes now I\'m demanding things like this from myself) and had to read this and see if a few other stories had updates yet. great job! I can\'t wait to take another study break and read more.

I can\'t wait to read more.
Update soon.

Mashell

I just can\'t believe it took me this long to find this wonderful piece of work - and MY LORD! you\'re posting faster than I can read!!!!!!!

That\'s it!!! I\'ve got to sort out my priorities and get back to reading fan fic, work can just wait.......(until at least the boss comes around again - hee hee)

I just love the antagonism you have Harry and Severus go through in this story, It\'s a work of art. The sniping and crass remarks, mutterings and of course the looks they give each other !!!!!!!!!! This is sooooooooo delicious, it\'s better than ice cream, and I\'m on a diet!!!!!


Ah! you make me want soooo much more of this, so take a day off, eat all these virtual bon bons I\'m sending your way and indulge (us).

ooo more of Snapes interesting plans lol it was an interesting chapter... can\'t wait to see what happens next

Hi! I\'m really enjoying this story so far. I love how snarky/manipulative Snape is. I can definitely see him acting this way were he put in this kind of situation in canon. I\'m really enjoying the interaction between Draco and Harry. Plot wise, it makes a great behaviour contrast to show Inferei/Inferei interaction and then show Inferei/Superei interaction like you have done. (Though I feel sorry for poor Draco\'s bum! *g*)

Your writing style is great and very easy to follow; however, there are a few technical errors that, when fixed, would make it even better. You frequently use a possessive \'s on the end of plural nouns (auror\'s instead of aurors), and I\'ve noticed a couple their/they\'re and accept/except errors. This is not huge, but it\'s definitely something a beta should catch and correct for you. I don\'t want to seem overly critical, but your writing is too good to have minor grammar flaws detracting from your plot.

That being said, I love this story and can\'t wait to see what happens next!

*shakes head* FUCKIN FABULOUS!!! *coughs* um yeah.. i am really enjoying your fic.. that i am *nodding* also you sound like the white rabbit in Alice

Someone rec\'d this story on one of my lists and while I\'m not normally a fan of D/s or threesomes I found that I couldn\'t stop reading until I had reached the end. I\'m fond of not-quite-human Snape and I only wish there were more of them, though I\'ll be honest and admit my preferance is for a submisssive Snape, sigh, not enough of those either... in fact, I can only think of one right now and it was more of a humor story. Anyway, I\'m looking forward to reading more and finding out what has put Snape in such a good mood and how Harry will hide his pregnancy.