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for Guilty as Sin

by harriet

person Storm
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I got shivers in that last scene, and the attack and follow up attack? Great writing. At first I was unsure why Draco wasn\'t helping Harry cuz when I first read \'beefy fists\' I immediately thought Crabbe and Goyle but then I realized that he was hurt himself and I was just waiting for Snape to swoop in KILL!KILL!KILL! but that whole Hogsmeade attack was great. Anyway can\'t wait to read the next update. And hey I like the dogpile idea. and any other idea concerning those three. They\'re all good really. ;) (head in gutter obviously)
person En4cerMax
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I oh so do love this story. I have always loved the Dom!Snape because it fit\'s him so nicely. Please don\'t leave us hanging. Draco and Harry can by their writsts tied to a post. Just not us. (Dom!Snape could tuck me into bed at night as well) :) Keep going!
person thing 1
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My emotions are very in tune with Harry\'s and I love that. You have a way with writting that makes me lose myself in the story. Update soon!!!! :D
person Aisling
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh im luving this... cant wait for the next 2 chapters then cya xxxx
person deb
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey,

i\'d like harry to tell Snape to go to hell and that he will tell dumbldore if he tried anything with him, saying he didint care if he ended up in azkaban. Snape obviously has to leave him, Draco is already broken, harry cant control himself, he doesnt want to go back to draco or Snape. But bit by bit he will give in, then Snape catches harry near the astronamy tower, and harry throws himself at severus and begs him to help him, that he would submit to him, that he would do as he wanted and master come in at some point of the conversation like please master or somthing. Snape realises its a much better feeling when a sub comes willinly than already broken it would be nice for that to happen. it looks like a d/s story which it is, hehe im glad Severus found out what happened really happened.
person jillypooh
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I keep thinking \'okay this is getting a little darker than I normally like\' and yet I can\'t stop reading! You have an amazing way with words! Keep up the great work! I can\'t wait to see what\'s gonna happen!
person Storm
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, That was great. I really enjoyed that, somehow I fell behind and had to pick up right after Draco talked to Harry in the Hospital wing and ...wow. I was surprised by all those twists and turns and Snape claiming them both and holy crap. Great job and I can\'t wait to read the next update. Did you mean that there are only 2 more chapters until the end of the story? Sad to see the story end but I can\'t wait to see how everything goes. There must be a lot going to be filling those chapters b/c I can only imagine what all must happen for them to be free(or if you\'re going to go the other route). See you next time
person acr
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Hope that once things settle that Snape will be kind to Harry. Not mushy, OOC snape, but more reasonable.
person Viv
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick question, will this end as a threesome story (hp/ss/dm)?
person Viv
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick question, will this end as a threesome story (hp/ss/dm)? I know you gave a M/M/M category, but will they end up as a threesome permanently?

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