rate_review Reviews

I love Dark Harry fics. Just found yours and noticed it hasn't been updated since 2005. Are you planning on continuing it?

awesome! plz update! i loved it so much!:D:D:D:D:. can't wait for the smut!

Hi!

I like what you have thus far; hope you continue with it! :)

I hope you havn't given up on this fic, because I think it's one of the best fics I've read in a long time. PLEASE continue. ^.~

Darling, are we missing a few chapters here?

Myrddin Ambrosius is a PMSing bitch.

Will you please continue??!!!!
This story is gorgeous, and a rather original angle
on the whole Harry gone bad thing
Go on
I beg you
Jo

i like yay for evil/dark harry
the thing with the origanal lady of darkness is a good idea pretty orig i don\'t think i\'ve heard it before
two thums way way up (if you\'ve seen disneys herculease think the loki like dude i can\'t rember his name normally i\'m good with greek mytholagy)

You have a good beginning. You need to watch your spelling, however. If there\'s a word you aren\'t sure about, you should look it up or ask someone how it\'s spelled. The Harry Potter Lexicon (http://www.hp-lexicon.org/) is an excellent source of words unique to Harry Potter.

ch. 2
apperated - correct spelling - apparated

ch. 3
apperatain - correct spelling - apparition

ch. 4
ageist - I can only assume you meant \'against\' as that is the only word that would be appropriate in the sentence context.
Intelegent - correct spelling- intelligent
eccelent - correct spelling - excellent

ch. 5
amerced - correct spelling - immersed
exited - correct spelling - excited
sence - correct spelling - sense

I liked the story when you first put it up but now that you are reposting it I an see some of the changes. I have waited for new chapters and am glad to see that it has not fallen to the way side. Also.. I will play your game you have listed and I dont know all the pics yet but I will perhaps guess Rezay is an idea for your Draco char? Hope Im right and waiting for the next update.