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for Only You Can Set Me Free

by wizgrl14

person ShadowVixen
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT!! YOU..YOU..HORRIBLE PERSON!!! >_< Though..I'll admit. You have a very good taste in music. Goo goo dolls - Iris. I love that song. <3 Haha. Well, update soon! Pleeasseeee. I really want to read the next chapter. And if you could, if not to much of a bother, make the chapters longer? That'd be awesome, and then you wouldn't have to update asssss often. Anyways! I'll leave you alone! And poor Draco, getting yelled at by Harry. o.o
person Answers
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love all of it accept for the mating infront of each other, or in the same room thign, thats just wierd, if you keep that bit in, i'll just skip it. Which is a shame cause i was looking forawrd to the sex scene. Also, i think you need to develop harry's and dracos relationshiop, It seem kinda pathetic at the moment. they dont even know each other! And please dont put that "he had watched his for ever and so practically knew him" cause it's not the same. Authors just do that when they get lazy! Please update soon, i think Harry should be the leader!
person Hazel
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeease can Harry win? DomHarry = LOVE. Pleeeease???
person Amessis
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it again! But I'm worried that this leader thing will destroy them. More please!
person bananagirl
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah, I don't even care what happens to Snape... I just want Harry to be the alpha! :D

Why can't they have two separate packs, though?
person thrnbrooke
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 16! Harry yelled at Draco? Did he hurt Severus? What happens now?
person Sandra Smith
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellant story...there will be more i hope
person Draeconin
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
May I ask why Harry is calling Remus, supposedly a very good friend and mentor, by his bare surname as though he were only an acquaintance and a peer? Even if they were on more formal terms, as a younger person to an adult or as a student to Lupin's official status he should be saying 'Headmaster', 'Headmaster Lupin', 'Professor Lupin', etc. If they're on more friendly terms he should be using Remus' first name, or anything which Remus suggests and Harry finds acceptable. In no case should Harry be using the man's bare surname like that.
person Amessis
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved again! So Sirius is going to join them? Who will his mate be?
person cyn
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
getting cuter and cuter

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