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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, why has Draco got to be so mean? Can\'t he just fall in love with Harry??? XD
I noticed you wrote \"littlest\" somewhere in the text. That\'s \"smallest\", not \"littlest\".
Otherwice, the fic was great! Please write more!
I noticed you wrote \"littlest\" somewhere in the text. That\'s \"smallest\", not \"littlest\".
Otherwice, the fic was great! Please write more!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 2! Will Draco finally catch the snithc? He\'s got the Dark Mark? And Dumbledore allows him to be at the school?
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha, that was good! Very good for a first attempt, just may want to think about spacing out paragraphs and such. But very good, and really funny! I hope you write more in the future! ^_^