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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O
This is something I never would have expected. Time travel? Well, with the way things turned hout at the end of HBP, I can't say Harry wouldn't have jumped at the chance.
Fascinating story, and by all means continue!!!
But one thing bugs me. Little grammatical errors like:
<"You say that this room requires anything to the one who enters it?" Dumbledore
asked.>
slightly take away from the enjoyment of the story.
All in all, a four-star already! (And I never rate stories before they're finished!)
This is something I never would have expected. Time travel? Well, with the way things turned hout at the end of HBP, I can't say Harry wouldn't have jumped at the chance.
Fascinating story, and by all means continue!!!
But one thing bugs me. Little grammatical errors like:
<"You say that this room requires anything to the one who enters it?" Dumbledore
asked.>
slightly take away from the enjoyment of the story.
All in all, a four-star already! (And I never rate stories before they're finished!)
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo this is NIIIICCEEE ^-^ UPDATE!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*brings an angry mob who starts chanting* UPDATE! UODATE! UPDATE!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story!! keep it up! next chapter please.... :)
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm...interesting. ^.^ I\'m surprised I\'ve never seen something along these lines before. it\'s nifty.
looking forward to more!
looking forward to more!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a fascinating story! It is awesome!)))
I really really love it!
Update soon)))))
Love, Xenia Marvolo.
I really really love it!
Update soon)))))
Love, Xenia Marvolo.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It\'s great!
You surely should continue this mind blowing story!
Wonderful!!!
You surely should continue this mind blowing story!
Wonderful!!!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So cute! Well, mayby cute isn\'t the right wortd. But it is so utterly nice and exciting! Please update soon ))))
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this story is promising. I look forward next chapter)))
Best wishes.
Best wishes.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!Update!!!!!!!