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So glad to see more of this!

Oh I can't wait for chapter 5! Thank goodness for Hermione or Harry might have messed this up. Oh I hope this is a good thing!

Great chapter!! Please update again soon. =o)

You wrote bun-buns!! hehehehe i love it!

I can't wait for more

Yeah! More.

OK, I know I've read all this before, some time ago. I think it was on this site, but maybe not. But I know I only read the 3 chapters you currently have posted. I liked the story then and I still like it a lot. So is this a re-post? Have you decided to finish it?
It has a lot of great potential, with the Alliance and a potential biological war. And, of course, the H&D action!
The story is well written for the most part, but you have spelling, grammar and syntax problems that detract from it and could easily be sorted out for you by a beta. I don't know if you have a beta or not, but I'd be willing to beta this story for you. Feel free to email me if you'd like to talk about me beta-ing for you. Iamscullysmile@yahoo.com.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!

OMG!!! I love this!!! Ihat last line in chap 2 was awesome... ahahahahahahaha!!! I can't wait to read harry's reaction!! please write more soon!!!

Need chapter 4!!! If Draco hurts Harry I will help torture and kill him!

"I may not have a large wing span to impress you with, but I do have this"-- HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! oh that shnitt was funny!! omg!! Please write more soon!!!

What happened to chapter 3? I was waiting for 4 but instead only 1 and 2 were here. No matter. I can't wait for chapter 3!