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for Caution Pushed Aside for Love

by SandyJean

person Jake
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What's with all the =(E
person RandH4ever
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@ should be "at" and & should be "and". It isn't that hard to write correctly. If you need help with the English language (which apparently you do), e-mail me at kirsten56@lycos.com.
person jess
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, sorry i didnt get to read it before now, ive had loads to do this weekend. i think draco should develop a crush on charlie, i do love draco slashiness
person Bree
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, great so far, but you REALLY need a beta...
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, but you should get a beta to fix the little things (like @ and & should be "at" and "and").

I'm willing to help you. E-mail me at kirsten56@lycos.com
person Louisa
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm reviewing - I just wanna find out what happens next
update?
person jess
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yey your back, i thought u might have left but u didnt and u brought a new chapter with u :D, i'm so glad fred is there for charlie, he so needs it. im starting to get really pissed at bill though. x
person me
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poorly written but goo plot, keep writing
person Katie K
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool. I like this. It's kind of annoying that you say '&' instead of 'and' and '@' instead of 'at', and I think you need to look into getting a beta, but I certainly love this story so far! Please update soon!
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Change the @\'s to \"at\" and the &\'s to \"and\". If you need a beta, I\'m willing to help.

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