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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start. please tell me that you intend to finish.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting...definetly the part about not obliviating Severus...I waited for this update...you had such an interesting opening...
Keep it up....
Keep it up....
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued by your story so far. I truly truly wish Jo had not had Snape betray Albus like he did, but I can only conclude that he did it in self-preservation. I like when people twist the last book to redeem Snape. There are many creative ways, and having Albus tell him to end him is a good one. It's the thing I thought of and hoped for when I read that part. Please continue, I'd love to see what you do with this.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am curious as to where you are going to take this. I liked that you went back to her mother and that she knew that something had happened to Hermione because of it.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now, you KNOW you have to continue this immediately, right? Good writing. I\'m hooked.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far: I love the post-HBP plot lines. I loved the \"drop the charm, not that you had much to start with,\" line. I\'ll keep looking for updates.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a very interesting start! Looking forward to reading more.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great story. In the flood of stories written after HBP, I think that this is one of the most original I read. I\'ll be waiting for the next chapters.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Update soon. Can\'t wait to find out what happens next.
Tiffany
Tiffany
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was an excellent beginning, I know I\'m looking forward to more- soon! Good writing.
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