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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* I fear the moment that Snape discovers it's Sirius. But I find this very interesting... And I think Dumbledore knows about this.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
before I give the story feedback, I have to tell you that I am having a very hard time reading it because it is not properly formatted.
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yah, u update. that's so good. I love your fic.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was cute. Sirius was so lovely when he cared about severus. More please.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really cute! update soon please
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, please continue.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much, and am extremely excited for the next chapter. So please, please, please hurry and write it.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It starts lovely, Snape speaking about his pain only to a randomly found dog is just sad and excellent! Please update soon.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just a little piece of con-crit. I would suggest you go back and include paragraphs in your story. It is exceedingly difficult to read without line breaks and such. There were also a few spelling errors. From what I could see, it looks like you\'ve got some good ideas. Properly beta\'d this should be a good piece.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was awesome! I loved it! You\'re a great writer