rate_review Reviews

I love this! I mean I really Love this. Its brilliant! and your first fic you say? Bravo! My first was nowhere near as good as this. You hhave a talent my dear. I\'m a big fan of the pairing so I simply can\'t wait untill they get together.....well I hope they do! I hope to see an update soon! Keep up the good work. And hey come join this HP site I\'m on. There are loads of SS/HG fans on there so plenty to talk about. :) http://thaelixir.proboards49.com

I like your story and the way you develope the plot.
I hope we will get a update soon.

Sandra

Kick ass second chapter! I can\'t wait to read more! You\'ve got to update again and soon!

Tiffany

It is a good story, and I like where the plot is going. However, I was quite surprised to hear that you were and English major. Based on the errors (grammatical and spelling alike), I would not have considered this English major material. Do you have a beta, or do you at least proofread? I do like your story; I\'m just hoping that next time you will have figured out where to use commas. Although, I must say that I am impressed with a bit of your vocabulary. Aquiline is such a good word, and it is rarely used in writting like this. It makes things more interesting. Do not fret, I shall continue to read your story if you decide to not fix any errors. It it is great story and I do enjoy. Have a nice day.

Emmaline

This is great so far...Keep up the good work...

Apart from you spelling Voldemort wrong - you spelt it Voldermort - this was a great start... although a little confusing when you had the \'flashback\'... I look forward to the next chapter!

Great start so far. Please update again and soon!

Tiffany

I think you have a good base to build your story on. I\'m looking forward to more chapters.