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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I eagerly await the next update you are off to a wonderfull start.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and can\'t wait until you update it. The new movie doesn\'t have enough Snape in it so I am glad I can get my Snape fix on AFF
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! is it done? i hope not! if not, finish quickly!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I love the rythm of your writing. It doesn\'t feel slow to me at all and I\'m looking forward to more. You told a lot in that 1 page and very well I might add. Please continue.:-)
LK
LK
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is most excellent. You have really shown a post-war Hermione that is believable. Her emotions (or lack there of) communicate the horror of her experience. I can\'t wait to read more of this, and see how the situation between her and Snape develops.
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write very poetic prose. I love the way you describe Snape. Slow build is good. Just keep it coming.
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just absolutely love this line! It is the best I have ever heard to discribe his voice! \"...to hear his cyanide almonds dipped in chocolate voice very near to her ear.\" Great chapter BTW - I can\'t wait for the next one!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. :)
Am waiting for more
Am waiting for more
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, this IS a parody, right? I thought the \"dolphin hair\" wand core was hysterical!! Please write more!!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this! Can\'t wait to read more. Just one nit-pick, though- the Patil twins are Parvati and Padma, not Parvati and Padme. Padme is the princess/ambassador married to Anakin Skywalker in the newest Star Wars movies. Also, Parvati\'s the Gryffindor if it matters to your story at all. ~A