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for Punishments of a carnal nature

by botonchan

person Phoenix 5
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue
person Ari
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, has some promise.
person momoko
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting
person JiyuHatellKodai
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Snickers*
*Giggles*
*Laughs*
*Evil Laugh*
Buzzzzz
*COUGH HACK WHEEZE* DAMN FLIES!
Continue plz!
person Catty
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*g* I\'m looking forward to more! ^_^
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sounds good can\'t wait to see what you will have snape do.
person Tonie
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was pretty good for a begining. Hope you post some more soon
person myniephoenix
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh this will be hott.. update soon..
person Lady Desu
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It seems interesting.. If not a bit overused. There were a couple mistakes and the diolouge was in a werid format. Also, I lost some respect for you when you asked for at least 5 reviews.. I mean. You have to write for YOU. Not REVIEWS. If you can\'t write because you like to write. Then. Well. I can\'t explain it. But you should write for yourself not to get praise. Anyway. I guess update. Sometime.
person Eloradanin
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kewl, you\'ve gotten my interest peeked. keep it coming, pardon the pun.

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