rate_review Reviews

Ch 48 - Oh dear heaven to be a platter for that wizard!!! Whew! what a chapter.

YES! LUCIUS GOT WHAT HE DESERVED!! I almost feel bad for him. dang.

You are such an amazing writer!

That is the best revenge on Lucius that I've read yet. Take that!

Ch 49 - Awww, poor lucious Lucius. What goes around comes around.

Damn man...it's friggin hot in here!!

You really are absolutely a bloody brilliant writer!! I really wonder sometimes
if you understand what you do to a reader, I mean I am soooo bloody horny after your
stories!! But my boyfriend thanks you and me too of course. Update Soon Please.

Oh, Lucius so deserved more. What is next? More HG/SS.

I don't know what to say I really don't. I liked Severus and Hermione storie but as for Lucius I have no comment, No Comment at all.

To be honest, I was really enjoying the story pre-lemons. I know, I know, this is Adultfanfiction.net, and lemons belong here. It was just something of a shock to go from telling a really interesting story about the tension between two people working out the cure to the Killing Curse to -wham- little but sex. (The addition of Neville was especially fantastic.) I hope that for a continuation of lemons balanced with more on Rita, Harry, Ron, and Snape as an intelligent, complex man as well as a demon in the sack! =D

I only have one real complaint. Lucius is an utter bastard, this is true. But did that merit a humorous rape scene? Rape fics can be fascinating if written well, but to be utterly frank I found the rape for a laugh sickening, exacerbated by having been blindsided with it. If possible, I'd like to suggest that a warning disclaimer be added.

Thanks so much!


- Jamie

Glad he got his just deserts! Looking forward to the next part.