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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're writing is just so amazing...its so addictive!! Great new chapters! I never really saw Snape that way before...the poor man has to live with the death of others at his hands, is shunned by others for being an ex-deatheater, and no one appreciates him...no wonder he's a snarky bastard! Poor Sevvie!!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeww. The scene with the prostitute really sullied Snape for Hermione, I think. I would have preferred it had he wanked off while thinking of Hermione in naughty ways. I think the only way to redeem yourself here, Ms. Figg, is to let our heroine have a similar experience. What's good for the gander.....
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 10 - Gotta go to bed but have I told you lately how much I love Eli? hahahaha. Severus is a real piece of work the way he sacraficed Hermione's reputation for the greater good...namely him. Huh.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 16 with edit - well, it was nice of him to remember to ask about the males for Hermione. Hmm, that could be a funny scene - Severus brings Hermione to the Diggs and pays for a guy for her! I -think- she'd change her mind and back out.... maybe....
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome...keep going!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 - You have just given them a very interesting twist. Go Eli!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the frank dialog between HG and SS, yes those were mindless cold lemons, but they had a point they only highlighted SS' loneliness.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love it! Love it!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a bastard. But knowing your Hermione, he will get what he deserves, bad and good.
sandra
sandra
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more please! I am loving it!