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for Ultimatum

by booback

person Elmo
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very very original and nicely done XD

i mean really...its really original and thats well...original.....

XD great job so far
person Heather
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! This is so amazing you have to continue it and update very very soon!
person Really?
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Please keep up the good work.

It would be great to read a bit of Ginny and Blaise in the mix as well.

Looking forward to the next chapter - please update soon!
person Akasha
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE!!!! I LURVE THIS STORY!!!! I CANT WAIT TO HEAR MORE!!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hnmmm
person Cassie
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! I LOVE IT!!! Can't wait for more!!!
person Kaythan
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was excellent! Not only was this well written, but Draco was in character--well, it was enough to make a Draco/Hermione relationship realistic, anyway. That was soo hot...please update this soon. We need mooooore! ^_^
person Pipita
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM


I love it!!! I just love it!! Very good and cant wait for the next chappie!!

Keep it up!!
person Donavon
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure whether I like the way your story is going or not. At the end of
chapter two, when Draco went to sleep. I wanted Hermione to kill him for the deaths
of Ron and Harry. Then I reasoned that she may be waiting to take out Voldie.
However her acceptance of Ginny and others fate, as my skin crawling. Perhaps because I
always think of Hermione fighting, even when submissive, I cannot get through you story
line.

However I will keep reading even though I disagree with your plot.

Best wishes and thanks for a thought provoking story.
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You lost those reviews, right? Did you get them back? I don't think so, because I can't find the review I left talking about my sisters friends being over... Well, now I am at the library, not much better! I'll read it though... give me time. I got another new computer so I'll have awesome internet axcess whenever they all get hooked up!

'Till a later review--
Athene

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