AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for Transfiguration of the Heart

by Losille

person 0blivion
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cant even tell you how addicted i am to this fic! please continue!!
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person mk
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very enjoyable snape/hermoine story so far. the only problem w/ aff, is that you can't ever tell how long ago something was written. it could be the last chapter was written last week, or last year.

well, I am enjoying your story and hope to see more added to it in the future.
happy writing.
mk
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Bek Allen
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Please update soon! I've just foregone sleep to finish reading these fifteen, wonderful chapters. You had me absolutely hooked within the first three paragraphs that I had to read to see what happened. I can't wait to see Viktor and Minerva's responses... and Snape and Hermione's for that matter.

Please update soon as possible, I really would like to see how this all ends up.

Bek
person lemonade
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually, if she doesn't want Victor, I could take him off her hands.... ;D

Well, it looks like she has a chance with Severus, as unlikely as it seems. He's quite the challenge. Hope he offers her something warm to wear. Maybe like his sheets.
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm going to sound like an obsessive freak but here goes... That's IT??? GAH! That just whetted my appetite for an update. All kidding aside I am still very intrigued to see how this unfolds.

Here's the constructive criticism: I noticed several spots where the autocorrect in Word fixed a misspelling and inserted the wrong corrected word. A quick read through (5 minutes tops) will fix the problem.

I impatiently await further installments in this very engaging series.
person Shanastay
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your entire fic in one sitting. I consider myself a rather harsh critic, but other than the occasional typo (we ALL have them) I found nothing worth criticizing. Excellent story. Very well written and clearly thought out. I am especially impressed by the evolution of the central relationship as it is utterly believable. Bravo! Thank you for taking the time and effort to grace us with your talent. I certainly hope you have not given up on this story. I will keep checking back for updates. Happy writing!
person Evelynn
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far! I can't wait for the next update!
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing. I'm not sure who she'd be better off with, actually. I usually don't like Victor ... too neaderthal for me ... but he's becoming quite a sympathetic character in your hands. Great story. Can't wait for an addition.

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?