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Always a pleasure reading your work, Corazon! Poor Ron, does everyone feel he would be a bad lay? Of course Hermione and Severus would ahem, entertain the masses, two brilliant minds coming together? How could it not be hot!? I also liked how at the end Hermione was independent as was Severus, which is a rarity. Usually, they can't live without each other. I like the fact they don't realize it. Great work! Thanks for sharing! ~Elizabeth

Very funny story. It does seem like Fred and George would do something like that...hehehe. As for constructive critisism, I think you could add a little more description and imagery (especially to the sex scenes) and it would be that much better. And I recognized this story from an urban legend where a couple returns to the motel the stayed at on their honeymoon to celebrate their anniversery and decide to watch a porn movie provided by the motel, and it turns out to be themselves!

LOL this was great! Lavender deserved to be compenstated for her pain and humliation, Go Snape and Hermione! I bet Fred and George won't try something like that again *laughs even harder* Excellent job and I did see that episode of "Married with Children" it was too funny.