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begging for an update :P i need some harry/draco action!

i love what you have written so far.Please update soon

xxx

Ouch, now Draco hit Harry bad. >.< If Harry starts crying, I'm going to...
Okay, so I can't do anything... >.< But you can! *wink* Make him be alittle nicer, pwease!
Or at least make Harry figure out what Draco really feels... ^^

I really like the way you write, you hardly have any flaws in your typing. The only thing that I would recommend, would be more spaces. It's easier to read the story, when you leave empty lines every now and then, when you write dialogues, e.g.
But as it is, I always start to wait for more when a chapter ends. This story has the thing to become something!

Sincerely yours, Chi

Great chapter! I can't believe it was Ron who figured out it was Malfoy! hmm... interesting. =o)

Please, PLEASE update soon! I love this story so far and I can't wait to see what happens when they go back to Hogwarts, I get goosbumps just thinking about it! Happy writing!

Poor Harry! Need chapter 5! What happens next?

I never noticed that you had updated 2 chapters! I love this and can't wait until they are face to face! great job!

update,please

Need chapter 3! That was a bit rude. So what does Harry have to say to that?

oh my actual god i luff this! write more! now!
are you still looking for a beta?
Lily xxx