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by kissherdraco

schedule May 22, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Love this fic! I read it before and it took me almost a year to find it again. I won't be missing it again!

schedule January 28, 2020 at 12:00 AM

nice begining.. but from this chapter i think harry is very protective of hermione.. lil ooc i guess..

schedule February 3, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Love this story! It is so delightfully angsty!

person Zonietta
schedule October 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM
schedule October 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This story was pretty intense. For some reason, I cried around the last 4 chapters. I guess I felt bad for Draco especially when H said she didn’t love him. Then H had to go run to Harry just to validate her feelings for Draco. Draco’s behavior was difficult to grasp or accept but it’s understandable coming from a pure blooded family in which his father was domineering and violent. I feel bad for what Draco and his mother went through and what they had to cope with. I’m glad Lucius died already cuz I don’t think Draco and his mother would survive another day living with him. Draco was very difficult with Dumbledore that I was afraid Dumbledore was going to expel him. My favorite/funny line was Ch. 17: 

‘Oh, and Granger’

’Yes?’

’Your book is upside down.’ 

😆

Thanks for sharing. 

person MotekElm
schedule July 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This isn't just a DarkDraco trope, it's a violent, rapist, disturbed Draco who makes excuses and blanes his (dead) father for all his bad decisions/ behavior . Weak Hermione. Ineffectual golden trip. So disturbing. I'm afraid a teen will read this and romanticize it, like "she says no but she really wants it"

person MotekElm
schedule July 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Good angst . Really draws put the pain and drama. Too much talking.

I think the author furgets about HP magic. No marauder map, invisibility cloak, legilemency, augamenti, etc when they would fit well in the story.

But I like that the author is attempting some consent and a redemption arc for Draco

person MotekElm
schedule July 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Whole disturbing. Non con with the excuse of "she says no but really she wants it". Makes me nauseas

person MotekElm
schedule July 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Why would HermiobH like this version of Draco at all? She should just incarcarate him and humiliate the predjudiced wanker

schedule March 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Update please:(

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