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person Edania
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just saying to ya. Not saying bad about your story with my review. i like hows its coming out now..way differerent from many i read.
person Pam
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, snape has a temper, poor Hermione. Please post again soon. Thanks.
person betwitched
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Since last I wrote I finished reading 'The Lighthouse' by P. D. James, and guess what? She had four, yes, #1, #2, #3, #4 Epilogues!! So my dear if one of the best British mystery writers can do it, why can't you? Continue please, I can hardly wait for the 'sammich'.
person Pam
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way you ended it, it tied up with the way you wrote snape to be, It was a great story, and I look forward to reading more stories from you in the future. Thanks.
person mekareami
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story. It gave me days of excitement waiting for the next chapter, yet you write so quickly there were numerous rewards throughout the day ;)

I look forward to your next piece and hope you have a happy holiday
person FranB
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When i read the last part of this chapter a surtain phrase popped into my head. Boys with Toys. It's from goldeneye. I believe bond and the other guy were fighting over a woman too. I like your way of thinking considdering Snape and Hermione. Looks like Snape don't want to share his toys anymore.

FranB
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I love you (in a completely platonic way)! I wish my Granny told stories as interesting as yours... I so want a SS/HG/LM scene. I haven't read one in forever! You know, I blame you and LOTM for my inability to write my own fanfics! Everytime I get to writing, one of you two has updated a story that I feeel compelled to read!

:-P
person Ms_Figg
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Edenia: I appreciate all your thoughtful reviews. They are very clear and well expressed. You take a lot time writing them and that means a lot. Thank you so much.
person LoveSpell
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo on another fantastic story! As usual, your stories continue to be the best on the site. I look forward to hopefully, your next story. Have a Merry Christmas and a joyous new year!
person beetle juice
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:O ... Oh Noes ... :O *shudders*

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