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schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that was for chapter um...i don't know.. Hermione's first night at Voldemort's. She said good night, severus said fuck you... hahahahaha!
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch49 OMG! HAHAHAHA! Oh, poor Severus! Hopefully that disciplined nature of his will make this ruse work! Oh goody!
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm tryig to figure out how exactly you do that which you do. Every story I've read of yours is explicit, designed, and powerful. I saw in one author note that you were going to end the story somewhere in the teens. I am so very grateful you did not. How you made Dumbledore evil and selfish...that was pure genius. It was extremely believable. I am so very impressed with this. I am going to go look over your reviews for a friend of mine that I know has read your work before and see if she has read this. I think she will enjoy this immensely and since she is an avid supporter of mine, I find I need to deliver her a rather delicious treat. Lucius, Hermione, and Severus all together...Oh yes, she will be very pleased.

Again, thank you so much for developing your creativity to a point that is unparalleled in my opinion.

WickedWitch
person Chavela
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

Okay, now that was just really stupid. I never really have EVER said that about what you write. But, umm no matter how much you like someone, if you are not ready to be with anyone and they threaten to rape you! You are not going to get wet.

That is so UGH!
person Chavela
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17

This I like. Thank the gods something good is happening.

This Primordial thing is kick ass!

Awesome stuff there.
person Chavela
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 35

YES! Hermione is brilliant! Snape is such an ass, and I am glad she is being a bitch!
person nikki
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWW! adorable-adorable-adorable. I see an "APPLAUSE" sign somewhere :)
person purrfus
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
alternate ending.

Okay - this is a great story. Your PWP is usually Porn with Plot, and this is no exception.

You really do write the best Snape and make Hermione, who is not one of my favorite characters, fun.

person *DB*
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a fucking awesome story!!! i loved the final ending where the three of them got together!! Loved the story!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story .. i love the way u had hermione subtly change in a believable way, and not just had her different to start offf with

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