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Yay! I think you achieved the right balance. Can't wait until your next story. :)

i spent four or five days reading this story. i grew aggitated each time i found there was no link to the next chapter. but, it was a good sort of aggitated. i loved it. marvelous job. i won't deny that you have a lot of talent here.

ciao.

I liked it. The ending was truthfull to the story-- as much as I would have wanted Snape to fall madly in love with her it wasn't going to happen with the snape of this story. You really are a great author. It was definately a good comprimise at the end.

I loved this story very much. I like the compromise you made by having them have an understanding but not having Snape fall in love, even though I like to have a romantic Snape sometimes. Very nicely done. I am also happy that Hermione also decided to only have one consort and Snape at that. I am looking forward to your next story.

Another great story! This one in particular was quite the journey. I loved how you constantly shifted the power dynamics throughout the story and ultimately allowed Hermione to become the more powerful force in the Snape-Hermione relationship. Since I hated evil, raping Snape with a passion at the beginning of the story, I thought you wrote him (and his motivations) amazingly well and managed to transform him into a dark and still slightly evil anti-hero towards the end. I thought the ending was quite fitting and consistent with the characters--this was after all a story which featured evil, raping Snape, so I wouldn't expect him to make declarations of love. I could envision them maintaining the consort relationship for a lifetime with Hermione continuing to love him in spite of himself. Amazing job and I look forward to your next story! :)

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That was excellent! Though I must admit to being one who wouldn't have minded Snape declaring his grudging love for her in the end! Lol! This also coming form one who really wanted that full-on 3-way w/ Lucius! Ah well, maybe another tale...which I will be waiting for impatiently! :-)
Until then- have a wonderful Christmas, MsFigg! And thank you for another wonderful story- one of the very best I've read.

Laura

Well that was a lovely surprise! I check aff to see if you've started a new fanfiction, and you've epilogued the hell out of this one :) You know I loved this story. Thanks for doing it and looking forward to the next....

i also i just have to draw a part from your story. With your okay of course.

Epilogue 7 - Who needs Christmas presents? Reading this fic has been sensational. Your "Epilogues" are a wonderful treat in themselves. Have a fondness in my heart for Lucius...and am glad he got a taste in. Wonder what's going to happen when he wakes up?