rate_review Reviews

Okay... you story.... need some major work. But it really does have potential. I hope I don't offend you but I will gladly offer up my services in bringing them to their full potential as a beta if you would like. If you are even remotely interested just drop me an e-mail at darkmoonchild52@hotmail.com. I would really love to help you out and I don't usually offer my help out randomly only to stories that have some sort of potential. I think the story plot is great... the grammar and use of slang and im-ing short cuts really degrades the story though. If you will kindly let me beta them for you... I will fix all of that for you. I would appreciate it if you gave my offer some thought and got back to me soon...

Child of the Darkened Moon