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for Long Time Coming

by LeoZodiac

person Nightwing
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, what a cliffhanger... how could you leave us there!!
Can't wait for more
Chow for now!
person PJ
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* great update this is a great story I feel so bad for Draco I hope he finds out who it was that did this to Harry. Hope Harry comes back. Update soon please
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I'm sooo angry at Draco! He started a relationship with Theo just because Harry supposedly left? And he claims to love him? It was four months! Four months! The cheat! Need chapter 8! Please don't let Harry die! I just couldn't bear it!
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT IS A TERRIBLE, MEAN, HORRIBLE PLACE TO STOP!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!! I love your story, it's amazing!!
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~
person Alison
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How on earth could you possibly end the chapter like that!?!?!?! You're an evil person and you'd best update soon!
person JJ
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This one got exciting fast!!! Why does everything always happen to Harry?
person Julie
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! It's a good story and I'm really enjoying it!
There are some mistakes, though, and they can be a little distracting. Please don't take this as a flam, because it's not meant to be one, but perhaps you would consider getting a beta? It's just that sometimes it's easier for someone else to catch mistakes because the writer themselves knows how it's supposed to go and misses things. ^^;;
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another baby? Oh I can't wait for chapter 6! No one saw this person? No one? Can't they check the wards or something?
person Snarky B.
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Get a beta reader.
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
still no clue as to who it was? what is he going to do when he realizes that harry is alive??

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