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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww!! That's so sweet! I just read another of your stories, uh, forgot what one, now, but you should make this a series! The other story said to tell you if that's how we felt, and I say you should!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* the end was so adorable! the last paragraph makes the entire story. wonderful job.
-moi
-moi
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so cute~~~~!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, that was amazing! Please tell me you're going to do a sequel?
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, you should really write a sequel. I would love to know whether they survive okay and whether Ron will get what he deserves which is a horrible fate.
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally. I'm not sure I like Ron either. Too bad things got so bad for our hero's in your story. But the ending was nice, not that the story wasn't, I just like fluffiness. Thanks for sharing.
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, that is so sweet!!!!! great job!!!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH AMAZING !!! TEARS EVERYWHERE !!!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is excellent, any more planned? or just this one chapter? I'd love to hear more about the pair...
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please DON'T make a sequel! I'm sure how this must sound, and I promise that I'm not trashing you (I actually quite enjoyed this), but give me a moment to explain. It's rare to find a one-shot story that actually makes sense without giving TOO much background information. This is beautiful JUST the way it is; to make it any bigger would be to devalue it entirely. Start another story, or write your sequel as a separate post. You're a good writer, but like I said, this is fine just for what it is.