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for Earning a Name

by Talin

person bananagirl
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this. Your Harry is just perfect - confident, in control, cruel but not too much so. I'm sure it won't take him long to get Draco begging. I have a lovely mental image of Draco kneeling next to him now, so thanks :D
person avihenda
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you really are good at teasing. :-) great chapter. a bit short, but I live, even for the scraps. ;-)
person Melora
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is well-written, but I can't help but feel disturbed by the main plot. What Harry is doing is so wrong as to border on the repulsive. Yes, Draco was a snarky brat at school, who delighted in taunting people he didn't like. So were a lot of us. It doesn't in any way justify making a slave out of him, robbing him of his home, his family, his future, his very identity as a human being. It doesn't justify humiliating him in front of his old school friend. It doesn't justify sadistically planning to make him suffer in body and mind. Frankly, I can't see much difference, morally speaking, between Harry and Voldemort right now, and I'm rooting for someone - anyone! - to get Draco out of his claws.
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapeter
person madussa
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes I had noticed that typo as well and was rather confudduled. Thank you for clearing it all up. Much appretiated.
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 6!
person Mew..
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, this was so good! I'm looking forward to the next chapter..
person hogo-chan
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... thats hot. please update super ultra mega fast!
person Paige
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please PLEASE update! I love the fic! It's amazing! ^_^
person avihenda
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wanna read more! So good! :-)

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