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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is definitely worth adding the other half!
Its nice and beautiful. The only little problem is the grammar and spelling, but with a nice fic as this it should be easy to find a willing beta.
Its nice and beautiful. The only little problem is the grammar and spelling, but with a nice fic as this it should be easy to find a willing beta.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story, but work on your capital letters and spelling.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start and I look forward to the next chapter I like the way Snape is ooc but in such a way that it fits the story perfectly.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good chapter. I felt bad for Severus when he kept thinking that Harry didn't really love him. I look forward to reading the next half.