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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Moved a little too quickly, IMO, from battlefield to dungeon. How did Harry even know it existed? A warning for the bloodplay would have been nice. Good grammar/spelling, etc. Only a couple of errors that I saw there. Might want to check on the difference between "bleed" and "bled". Overall not a bad effort. Thanks for sharing.