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I simply cannot verbalize how much I've enjoyed this fic so far. It's so incredibly humourous whilst being naturally so, not sounding forced. It's such a brilliant plot idea!

I did read both versions of chapter 11. I thought the additions were great, really moved the story and gave more depth. And I can't help but imagine Luna's point of view when the boys all suddenly appeared, running down the hall with the children :) Too funny. Just thought I'd note a conversion overlook, when the lot of them are in the bath, Malfoy is thinking about how hard things have been and speaks of it being the weekend yet, when it appears you converted the day to Monday.

I really like the changes it has a much better flow now. You have the best sense of humor!

That was a great chapter! it was fun, not to mention hilarious!! i cant wait for mor chapters!

lmfao!

That was brilliant! I'm glad you "unkilled" Snape, I really do like him as a character. This was even more hillarious then the last time I read it. Please keep updating and update soon!

Bek

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE your story!!!! Please update as soon as you can!!! ICK is just so adorable!!!!! I also like how you\'re rewritten that last chapter. It flows much better now.

Ch 11 revised - I like the changes you made. Your chapter flowed in a more cohesive way and as such, made a great deal more sense. You also added significant parts that made your plot more interesting.

I love Luna here.She is still an off-beat character but you really show depth of character. She represents here society's single mother and is doing a wonderful job of it. She takes responsibility. I hope her role in the story is expanded upon. She and Harry would make a great couple...afterall, he looks to love the kids. And speaking of Harry, I am so enjoying his joie de vie right now. He has embraced life and can finally just enjoy himself and he is.

Draco is a hoot, a hot hoot. He has accepted fatherhood and his comments are hysterical. Don't change him. I can't wait until he and Hermione are battling the colours of house with Ick's clothing. And I hope she is able to continue to bond with Ick and hasn't been set back in this relationship.

This is a great story and is so infectious to read. I love it. Now just one little correction to make. When you revised, you moved your timeline into Monday and the beginning of classes has started. Later when you have the boys and the kids in the pool, you have Draco feeling relieved it is the weekend because he doesn't know how he would balance Quidditch, classes, etc with Ick. He's done it and done it well. I know this was just an oversight because this section of the story wasn't changed much.

Carry on and I think you made a wise decision to revamp your chapter because it improved it immeasurably and will be a much easier chapter to build upon. Well done, as usual.

LOL at Draco, but, oy, poor Neville!!! And it sure loks like Draco's not the only one making a few realizations...Ron defending Pansy's honor? Very cool. And this new improved chappy 11 is bloody brillant too!!!

OMG I LOVE YOUUUUU!!!! lol. I can't wait for the future chapters and mayhaps the angsty stuff about herm's scars if it ever comes up. Good luck and I hope your muse gets you on a high!!!!

This story is bloody amazing it so cool and its heaps easy to follow. please please please please update sonn or i will surely die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but away from the dramatics i just can't get over how good it is please please please please wait haven't i already said this... anways you get what i mean lol (I'm not crazy)

Luv Jess

OMG I love your fic!!!!! And yes Draco has gone barkin'. Please update soon.