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by avari20

person Afrodite
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT OFF AT THAT!!
*dies*

You must update soon!!!
person KageMage15
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that hurt, oh lord that really hurt. LOL poor poor Draco. AWE man
person Stacy
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
My, my, she sure is a sneaky one,lol.
person Kristal
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:)
verrry funny!! lol
i loved it!
i want more!!
PLEASE UPDATE!!! ASAP!!
thnx
Kristal
person blondiexoxo
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh sneaky mom lol its cool hope to read more and maybe u could make a longer chapter but totally up to u ttyl
person Karen
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amusing chapter, not overdone. Low blow from Hermione though! ;-)
person Midnight Assassination
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>.< This story is like seriously kick ass!! Could you add me and e-mail me when you update? That would be seriously wonderful ^.^ your_nothing_compared is my yahoo name.
person AraLuna
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story idea. I'm definately intrigued. I particularly liked the imagery of Hermione floating in a pool of flower petals. It brought to mind that beautiful Millais painting of Ophelia. A very haunting and lovely association, especially if your Hermione has indeed endured some hardships. Looking forward to your next update! -Ara-
person avari20
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny you should mention that painting...I'm looking over at it right now....it hangs above my bed :) Thanks for your review!
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay... first thing's first. *LOVED* it.

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