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this is an inredible story! i usually hate stories where harry potter is the main charecter but this one is really great! i hope you are almost ready to post another chapter cause i'm pretty ready to read and review a new one!

good story. can't wait for the next chapter.

Good story.

Excellent! It\'s beyond anything in Mills & Boon ;)

Perfectly done! Your style of writing is very professional. I just have a teensy little request... PLEASE PLEASE WRITE SLASH IN THIS STORY!! I absolutely love how you've made Harry a dominating Alpha male - it would be a huge turn-on to see him dominate another fine male specimen ;) All the slash stories on the net have a lot of fem and fluff without much machismo... your story however shows a very masculine Harry. It would be fantastic to see Stud Veela Harry shag a bloke! I realize that you're writing Het, but could you please work the plot such that Harry takes male lovers too? Please, please do and I promise I'll tell all my friends about your fic!! Please-o-please??!!

Very interesting chapter. I like how all the female cast suddenly became 'interesting' and that sub plots/romantic possibilities are popping up like weeds :) lookingforward to future updates!!!!

Torturous cliff hanger there along with more mysterys to solve.

Lavender Brown a Veela, interesting twist, as is the Daphne/Andrea connection, could cause problems or a lot more fun and games on all sides.

An excellent piece of work, lloking forward to the next chapter.

I would right more but again I would be repeating myself and it is 2 Oclock in the Morning

Update soon.

Adam

More story soon please! I do NOT wish to you burn in the fire of a thousand suns, I wish you to post this story faster. This Harry Potter is lots and lots of fun.

A plot! that is a very welcome surprise. There is far to few of them. Keep it up.

A plot! that is a very welcome surprise. There is far to few of them. Keep it up.