rate_review Reviews

Is it that English is not your first language or do you just not know how to write?

*shrug* Well, anyone who has read my fics would know I pretty much say "graphic-shmaphic." Hm... This is a potential beginning, one or two spelling errors. Of course no matter how many times it seems I proofread, something always slips through. No one's perfect. Just keep an eye out for it.

was this meant to be written badly? I mean, structurally badly? for one, Hermione is not spelled 'Hermionie'. you should at least try to get that right. all in all, very mediocre writing. I wish I could say something positive about it. I hate to leave a bad review, but I don't see anything worth salvaging in this. The story has been done before, and I don't see anything really different, creative, or original, and the vocabulary is very limited and restrained. If you're going to write something, really write it. otherwise you shouldn't even bother.

Just to say, Thank you for the honest review! This is my first and I am enjoying it. But please, Be HONEST with me.
I don't really care what you way, just don't call me a sick bastard!
I will take more time writing the next chapter, I kind of run off with the first two and went crazy, so I can see how you see it as no constructive.
And the story line is not original, I know, but its basically just sex.

man ... snape .. you are mean .. please please more i like it ..i till next time later for now

angel

ps please update soon ..bye