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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was certainly entertaining!....and very hot too!
Nicely written although the story did tend to jump a bit, but......you're forgiven.
Nice ending though....will there be a sequel???
Thank you very much.
Nicely written although the story did tend to jump a bit, but......you're forgiven.
Nice ending though....will there be a sequel???
Thank you very much.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Will there be more? Your writing is wonderful and I'd love to read what happens next!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting, i liked that one, it is one of the few stories that represented the new more mature and slightly darker harry from the last book, a harry that could actually kill someone...
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You say finished, by I think you have the beginning's of a very fine story.
Still you're decision. It was a very good one shot, I think it could be a brilliant
story.
Still you're decision. It was a very good one shot, I think it could be a brilliant
story.