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for The Ring (Edit, not Update)

by Ms_Figg

person ccrawley
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a pleasant, happy ending.
person Snapelover11
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well...that was beautiful. Nice romantic foreplay and lust for everyone. I'm felling it over here! What about you guys? I am loving the "in love" Snape.
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Snape is finally going to get served his well-deserved slice of lemon "pie". *yum*
person k
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY, awesome update, is there more to come? I hope.
person AnyuBoo
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I got interrupted in reading this...the power went out for a while... Anyways, did I see you mention orchards? You know, lemons are very good for the health. :D
person beeky63
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All Hail to the Queen of literature! Another fantastic yarn from your enhanted quill. I loved the triplets, they were quite the little miscreants.
Toodles.
person K
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's so cool, love the ending. can't wait for the next story.
person AnyuBoo
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad to hear your phone is back. I can well imagine how your dogs must have felt...mine give me strange looks whenever I do something like that as well, then they go chomp on my husband's hands. :D Great chapter, as usual.
person amethyst
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story and am glad to see that your woes are somewhat straightened out. BTDT! Anyway, the only criticism that I have is that I felt that the confrontation with Severus' cousins was unresolved. Perhaps, I felt that he should have gone back and straightened them out, somehow, especially after the reception he got in the town. Maybe the possibility exists for a sequel.
person luna26
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know the first thing I did today was check to see if this chapter was up :) So much for work, was well worth the waiting. Great Great story!

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