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for The Ring (Edit, not Update)

by Ms_Figg

person JW
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 15 - hmm, if Grog likes to catch sleeping unicorns, perhaps the unicorns might be trailing him. And why does Severus have to sleep when Hermione and Raucous do?? Grrr..... As for Raucous - yay, Raucous! More bacon and eggs for our hero raven! (Well, not until after they get off the mountain alive.) BTW, I really like Melanie's art; you're fortunate to have her drawing for you - she's one talented fan!!!
person cecille
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like all of your previous stories but this has got to be my favorite :D the mystery/action/adventure storyline really adds a whole new dimension to hermione and snape's relationship. keep writing :)
person Trish
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this new approach. To see that SS is "stronger and more powerful" than Voldie and AD. But we always knew he had hidden strengths..... I am guessing the "remains" of Severus are in the box and h hasto deliver them to the Sacred Ground of his anscestors so he can resurrect? Arghhhh, Ms_Figg!!!
person droxy
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO- the bits about the dung were very funny. Vivaldi is not a nice guy, and he's not stupid either.
person chatty
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the image raucous sent hermione was soo funny. lol. the story is getting veeeeeery interesting now. :) and whats up with the ogre? cant wait to see.
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey all. Check out this fan art Melanie made for "The Ring" Awesome. http://www.usagistu.deviantart.com
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a chit is a young girl and therefore an entirely inappropriate term to be applied to a raven, no matter what its sex.
person liz
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent!!! update it!!! hurry!!!
person Lola_Lola
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I am a bit dissapointed. Your story is at the top of the list this morning -but- I have already read this chapter :-(
It was a good chapter of course, and I like the story, but where is the update?
person Given2Fly
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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