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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So I think it's a good story although they seem to cum too fast...you might want to put in a little more or at least a reason why he's going to cum so soon or she does...
Some more foreplay would be good!
Some more foreplay would be good!
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*applauds very enthusiastically* I don't know what to say! Thia one left me speechless! You're such a great writer!!! This work of genius certainly held my attention the whole time..and wow..the love scene with pansy and draco...then the kicker at the end...damn...this one needs a sequel, i think!! Great job!