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that was great the story was nothing like i have read and i courious to see what happens if you need ideas you can e-mail ne and i ca try to help but i just wanted to tell you it was great

oooooooooooooooomg!!!! *squeel* i absolutly ADORE this story! update soon!

Amazing. Just amazing. I just read this all for the first time today and it has blown me out of the water. :) You're weaving a beautiful story. Keep it up!

Wow this story is great. I really enjoyed it. Please e-mail me with the updates. I have to know who Draco's father is. I really hope that Lucius won't do anything stupid.

Great work.

love it cant wait to read more

I like your twists and turns in this story! I dread seeing what Lucius is gonna do and say!! Keep up the good work and update, again, soon!!

So good! Next chappie pleeeease!

wow this is getting good hope u update soon

Hi. I've really enjoyed reading your story thus far. I only have one suggestion/observation... if you were newly married, forced to be away from the person that you've discovered you're in love with, and then end up in your own room with a king size bed... would you go to sleep right away? Draco, being a healthy young man, would never just go to sleep without a really good reason..... :-) Like a horrible exam that Hermoine made him study for.... They are due for a juicy love scene I think. But that's just me. Normally, I think writers should let their characters determine their stories... if Draco and Hermoine are ready for sleep, then that's the way the story is going.

I know you ended your chapter that they "dozed".... but I can't imagine Draco not making a move to be with his wife. In the last chapter, I'm surprised getting to sleep beside her and not consummate didn't "kill" him.... LOL

I hope my comments were okay.

Keep writing

oooh i luv it! update!!!!