Ahem, have to clear my throat after reading that. Damn, yeah two pages of complete and utter porn.
Well done, well done.
I do feel a bit iffy about the "Daddy" thing though, it kind of disturbes me but then hey, I'm reading this, perfectly fine with everything else, ahah. I suppose when you read this type of yaoi mixed with Harry Potter, you sort of come with a devlish fetish.
It was great, you should definitely make anothe chapter--I thought Draco was going to be in the first chapter 'cause you wrote "silver eyes" but fair enough, I'm not sure how you could top that actually...But I'd like to see another chapter :) Pretty please?
Now... how about Voldemort? Severus, Harry and Voldemort?
But it would be a great idea to try and continue the fics since, they are really great plots and I want just like the rest of us to keep these stories alive!
Can I request a Sirius/Lucius/Harry next?
April
so hot, sounds like Harry enjoys his job ;)
Would LOVE o see a spanking, but i'm sure i'll enjoy what happens next no matter what.
Sarah