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for angel and devil

by jaws

person snakebyte
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beta.... Poor punctuation and spelling; poor capitalization of names; go to the Yahoo group and get a beta.
person Angel
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but this is not good. The spelling and grammer I can live with but the story? No not for me...
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